Nice job! Practice makes perfect. Looks like you agree with everyone that the transitions are a bit much. Also, please note that I removed your statement "pls subscribe..." that violates the community guidelines.
A sunny early September Saturday afforded us the chance to take a walk at Rivington. Starting at the Bran Car Park, we visited Liverpool Castle, located on the banks of the Reservoir, then took the long walk up to the Pike, where the wind made...