could i have some feedback on my video?

[FantasticMrF]

give me some feedback please

 

[Former Member]

Would you mind expanding the title of your thread to something more specific? "Looking for feedback on my video" would be a better title.

You can change the name of your thread by using "thread tools" then "edit title"

 

[Marine0302G2/8]

Nice job! From a novice point of view, I really enjoyed it. I'm sure some of the pros will have some helpful advice.

 

[FantasticMrF]

Would you mind expanding the title of your thread to something more specific? "Looking for feedback on my video" would be a better title.

You can change the name of your thread by using "thread tools" then "edit title"

Sorry, last time I did and my whole message got deleted and my title was shortened

 

[FantasticMrF]

Nice job! From a novice point of view, I really enjoyed it. I'm sure some of the pros will have some helpful advice.

Thanks very much! Probably will do

 

[8BitMavics]

Looks neat! From a layperson point of view, I found the scenes a little too long. There were a few times I was waiting for the scene transition. The top-down view made me a little nauseous... but was nice since you incorporated two elements (water and land) and it was shot diagonally. Probably the lack of horizon sets me off but that's just me.

Overall, keep on shooting!

 

[FantasticMrF]

Looks neat! From a layperson point of view, I found the scenes a little too long. There were a few times I was waiting for the scene transition. The top-down view made me a little nauseous... but was nice since you incorporated two elements (water and land) and it was shot diagonally. Probably the lack of horizon sets me off but that's just me.

Overall, keep on shooting!

Thanks very much for your feedback! Very good points and I shall do