Thank you for taking the time to watch, I can see now that the cut you mentioned is off time with the music and have fixed the issue in my timeline.Looks very nice. If I had to criticize something, I'd admit to not being a big fan of the music as an accompaniment for the video, and the cut between 0:45 and 0:46 struck me as a bit abrupt for some reason. I might use the B/W effect a bit more sparingly, or perhaps make the B/W shots stand out from each other via some post-processing, like maybe increase the contrast or something. That's all very subjective, though, and I'm having to work to think of something to complain about, so I'd call it a great job overall.
I work in the film industry, where it can be tough to find work if you don't have a cinematography reel to show what you're capable of. As such, the shots are supposed to give an idea of my ability, not only as a cinematographer and media manager, but as a pilot, hence the many different quadraxial movements, spiraling, etc.What is it other than apparent random clips.