Please critique this Cinematic Footage

[Drone.Guru]

Shot on Mavic

 

[Exphantomflyer]

Quite good, if you want critique, the take off and then a blur spoilt the opening scene then the transition at 1.58 and the following one was a bit nasty, also doing a pan right then left in the next scene lost the flow of the production

16 seconds to 23 was good, but I would have gotten a bit closer, or faded over to a closer shot, maybe from above.

For the end scene I would have got close and low to the factory and then flew back and away to reveal it.

 

[Drone.Guru]

Thanks for that. Didn't have much time to film and its one of my first videos so ill try improving!!

 

[ronk]

Since you asked for critique. I think the shots are good. Your pans could be slower. What bothers me is the transitions - there are too many different types of transitions. IMO, I would stick with one or two.

 

[Qoncussion]

Since you asked for critique. I think the shots are good. Your pans could be slower. What bothers me is the transitions - there are too many different types of transitions. IMO, I would stick with one or two.

Or none at all. Stick with straight cuts, or quick fades between shots ~no one wants to watch transitions. It's a good way to lose your viewing audience.

 

[Pingman68]

Agree with previous comments on transitions, also a few of the scenes were a little too short before they cut to the next scene, barely had time to see what it was showing. Very nice though, thanks for posting it.

 

[eek]

Ground shots were quite boring and there were too many of them. Look Drone Film Guide on youtube how to make your scenes more interesting

 

[KrollOz]

i tryed also something.

 

[Youser]

I was expecting to see mountains and ice

 

[Drone.Guru]

i tryed also something.

Looks good, a better video would be with smoother movement and some more cuts. The footage is cool though.