I believe you asked for feedback and that’s a good way to learn. I think you have some very good memories for yourself and have had a blast making them. For many, that’s what it’s all about.
You might want to consider doing a shorter, less repetitive version for a general audience. Also, you may want to experiment with a little less exposure (minus numbers on your ev) and play around with the contrast while editing, to see if it is more pleasing to you. On the positive side, your pans and tilts are nice and smooth.
In general though, I think you should just keep enjoying your hobby. Best wishes!