Air 2s a small project of mine

[k.achilleas]

a small project for advertising my friends job which is a massage therapist
Hope You enjoy feel free to coment my editing skills

 

[Phantomrain.org]

The very last clip was awkward compared to the rest of the video.
I would start off by flying over the water , the church and than surprise us with the Massage table and than focus all the shots from the Massage table as that is the Advertising Object and you dont want to loose focus of that and should be the ending shot as well.

Phantomrain.org
Gear to fly in the Rain , Land on the Water .

 

[k.achilleas]

The very last clip was awkward compared to the rest of the video.
I would start off by flying over the water , the church and than surprise us with the Massage table and than focus all the shots from the Massage table as that is the Advertising Object and you dont want to loose focus of that and should be the ending shot as well.

Phantomrain.org
Gear to fly in the Rain ,

The very last clip was awkward compared to the rest of the video.
I would start off by flying over the water , the church and than surprise us with the Massage table and than focus all the shots from the Massage table as that is the Advertising Object and you dont want to loose focus of that and should be the ending shot as well.

Phantomrain.org
Gear to fly in the Rain , Land on the Water .

thanks for the tips !
Land on the Water

 

[sikspy]

The very last clip was awkward compared to the rest of the video.
I would start off by flying over the water , the church and than surprise us with the Massage table and than focus all the shots from the Massage table as that is the Advertising Object and you dont want to loose focus of that and should be the ending shot as well.

Phantomrain.org
Gear to fly in the Rain , Land on the Water .

Your advice is correct! But where did you see a church? There is only a lighthouse.