Getting there but need suggestions

[nesstimo]

 

[Malavic]

Hi,

Nice view of the park. A couple of comments, not criticisms.

It seems a little soft? It could be youtube, maybe you tweaked the clarity? It's not every shot, just the trees mostly.

I love the rising reveal shots, that said, you immediately moved on to downward look into the trees. Both shots are good, but when something is revealed, let me take it in . I'm coming from photography although I've been doing video for years and when I pull up a shot, what is the subject? I ask myself that every single time I'm doing something. It needs to tell a story, otherwise it's just a technology demo.

The moving transitions and all are good and you get a nice taste of the park. The one shot running at an angle along the shore facing downward was hard to put into perspective but it was pretty...maybe a bit forward view there? I dunno...just took me a moment to get my bearings.

Still though, thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it.