My 2 cents (take it for what you paid for it: (I've not read the other comments so this may be redundant)
1) Get your
Part 107 YESTERDAY! You're already breaking the rules and that's just not a good look for anyone wanting to do the right thing and appear to be a professional. Anything you do that is not 100% Hobby/Recreational falls fully under Part 107 and you're putting you, your company, and your CLIENT at risk for anything you create without being Part 107. If you have any questions about the legality of this reach out to the Nashville TN FSDO and they can verify these statements and give guidance going forward:
(615) 324-1300 or send an email to [email protected]
2) Great work especially for your first Drone "GIG". Keep at it.
3) Way too long.... Here's how we handle people who want a mini-series on their property:
"We charge per minute of finished video and we are more than happy to take as much $$ as you want to give away but most Real Estate videos get boring after 50 or so seconds. Any more than that they lose interest and start thinking about what they are doing for supper this evening etc. The Sweet Spot is the 1-2 minute mark. Remember you're only wanting to show them enough HIGHLIGHTS to where they say, "Oh man I've got to reach out to So-n-So and get more information on that jewel ASAP". You're not trying to show every detail/aspect of the listing in this one video. Keep it simple and keep it refined."
4) Edit out those camera/gimbal adjustments. They are distracting and pull the viewer out of the experience.
5) Change up your style/technique more. Way too many "back away/reveals" for a single video. I understand that shot has the WOW factor and is a Must Have in many videos but after one or two I wouldn't repeat it in the same video. Mix it up to keep your viewer interested and not "anticipating" your actions.
6) The feel/pace of the video seems a bit slow. Maybe speed it up just a pinch. You could speed up some sections and then slow back to normal for areas justifying the additional focus/time.
7) Don't show/highlight same areas if possible. The first portion of your video seems to keep coming back to the "clearing/landing" area. Bounce around with various Points Of Interest and once an area has been highlighted go to the next one.
8) Try to never be IN your work. Sometimes it's almost impossible to not be but we go to great extremes to never be IN the final cut. We hide behind shrubs, trees, walls etc to stay out of the shot. Once in a while you can see a pants leg or an elbow in one of our shots if you know where to look but never a full person. Also many MLS will reject a video that has people or anything identifying (license plates, Real Estate signs etc) in the video or pics. When they see you in the video/image it pulls them out of the "scene" which is the opposite of what you want. You want them picturing themself in the drone viewing THEIR property.
9) This may just have been a mistake but never show the same information more than once.... at two different places you denote the amount of shoreline which causes the viewer to again get distracted (didn't I already see that information? What am I getting it confused with?).
10) Work on getting shots from various heights. Most of your work seems to be fairly on the same altitude but take full advantage of the ability to shoot from ground level to way high (less than 400' though). Maybe a shot running along the water just a few feet above the water's surface looking at the trees/shoreline could add some WOW!
Experiment and have FUN!!