My untrained assessment....take it for what it's worth. Video looks good on my small screen S8+.
I would mix in some other sights than just the beach and harbor area. My ADD started to flare up around the 2:20 mark. Maybe a low orbit around what appears to be a lighthouse on the beach...or similar about the town, or the rocks creating the harbor. Something to break up the beach scenes.
The end scene was pretty slick. I'd start maybe high 45 off their faces, and descending orbit round the short side to reveal the scene.
Now you just need to give it to the state TDC so they can give Tim Allen a huge paycheck to say "Pure Michigan" with the logo dissolve.