Not bad for your second flight, but not ready for prime time sharing (I didn't even show my wife any flight videos until I'd been flying for a couple months). I'd say it would only be interesting to someone who lives there - you started loosing me on the first too long shot of a highway with half the frame blown sky. You were shooting in hard high contrast conditions, which are extremely difficult to balance. If it were my video I wouldn't have bothered working on an edit. The music is nondescript, so not offensive, but not what I would call good either, it might get on my nerves if I watched the whole thing. Don't know what you mean about filters - did you shoot with a filter over the lens or use a filter when editing? Keep working on smooth cinematic camera movements (takes a lot of practice). Have fun.