Mini 2 Upstate New York

[Borvish]

 

[Dale D]

I'm surprised that you have had no comments so far. If you allow some critiquing, this films is, firstly, too long, with many repetitive shots. The film is essentially two separate subjects. The first section is numerous views of the school building and the geometric fountain in numerous different views, many repetitive, and associated with a lot of gimbal adjustments that should have been edited out. The film then transitions to the countryside, and the lake, again with a lot of repetitions. The subjects are given a rushed view in each clip, like you wanted to race through the entire editing process. This film could have easily been a great film if divided into two separate stories, tightly edited down to about 3 minutes for each. Of course, this is only my personal opinion.

Dale

 

[Borvish]

Thanks, Dale. I see, upi are right, next time i will consider your comments. Have i nice day.