Since you're asking for feedback, here it goes
(I love people telling me those things too, it's the only way to learn)
(also please forgive my English, as it's not my primary language and probably there will be somethings I explain in a weird way)
First of all, your shots (scenes) are too long. It's better to keep shots of 4 to 8 seconds normally, so the viewer doesn't get bored. Reserve those 14-15 seconds shots for something really spectacular.
You have really nice ideas to do your shots, keep them short as I mentioned and mix them so the video is dynamic (a traveling, then a cenital shot, then something more general... Etc)
Use the music. It's not just there to make pretty. Listen and listen the song, get used to its tempo, and change scenes accordingly to the music. Look for dramatic changes in the song, so you can make a dramatic change in your video. When you do that, you'll be able to not use fading black transitions all the time (1 or 2 times per video is cool, but don't abuse of them)
Color: the color I assume is like it went out of the mavic shooting in auto right? Get used to record in D*Log and color grade your videos on post production using luts. The results are amazing.
Also add black bars up and down. It gives a more cinematic look, more "pro".
Read a lot of premiere (or the program you're using to edit), watch a hundred videos on YouTube to get some ideas.
It's not hard, I've been practicing less than a month, have some pals giving me this kind of comments and enjoying a lot the edit process.
I leave you 2 videos of my own so you can see what I've been talking about (they will have some errors too, so your feedback is welcome too
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Regards, and there you go your first like and subscriber
