The OP's shot is just too much contrast between the bright and dark in each individual frame and between the centre shot and adjacent images.
Some things are just too much to be able to correct.
The lighting in yours is much more even which is the key to a good pano.
You've gone too low with yours which makes the lower part of the stitched image distorted as it has to be stretched when you present it as a big rectangle.
To avoid that, you can start higher and catch more sky and not go so low.
Here's a 2-row shot that avoids the distortion issue.