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First of all, I would like to say that it was nicely done. It had a logical flow and the music was pleasant and not distracting, but you asked for a critique so here is mine.
• The outdoor segment from 19 to 24 seconds may show the property, but without the house as part of the segment there is no reference to how it is related to the property.
• I am not a fan of the rapid movement from one scene to the next, but that is a personal preference. I prefer the cross fade.
• It is hard to tell (so perhaps irrelevant) but it looks like some white-balance adjustments could be made. Some of the interior shots seem shaded toward the blue spectrum.
• The light needs to be increased in the final pull-away from the front door. At least on my monitor it was too dark to make out details of the entry-way.
But, once again, it was nicely done and better than a lot that I have seen.
Nice job!
The transition from outside to indoors was well done.
Where is this house and how much?
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