Please critique this Cinematic Footage

Drone.Guru · Jan 14, 2018

Shot on Mavic

Exphantomflyer · Jan 14, 2018

Quite good, if you want critique, the take off and then a blur spoilt the opening scene then the transition at 1.58 and the following one was a bit nasty, also doing a pan right then left in the next scene lost the flow of the production

16 seconds to 23 was good, but I would have gotten a bit closer, or faded over to a closer shot, maybe from above.

For the end scene I would have got close and low to the factory and then flew back and away to reveal it.

Drone.Guru · Jan 14, 2018

Thanks for that. Didn't have much time to film and its one of my first videos so ill try improving!!

ronk · Jan 14, 2018

Since you asked for critique. I think the shots are good. Your pans could be slower. What bothers me is the transitions - there are too many different types of transitions. IMO, I would stick with one or two.

Qoncussion · Jan 14, 2018

ronk said:
Since you asked for critique. I think the shots are good. Your pans could be slower. What bothers me is the transitions - there are too many different types of transitions. IMO, I would stick with one or two.

Or none at all. Stick with straight cuts, or quick fades between shots ~no one wants to watch transitions. It's a good way to lose your viewing audience.

Pingman68 · Jan 14, 2018

Agree with previous comments on transitions, also a few of the scenes were a little too short before they cut to the next scene, barely had time to see what it was showing. Very nice though, thanks for posting it.

eek · Jan 14, 2018

Ground shots were quite boring and there were too many of them. Look Drone Film Guide on youtube how to make your scenes more interesting

KrollOz · Jan 14, 2018

i tryed also something.

Youser · Jan 14, 2018

I was expecting to see mountains and ice

Drone.Guru · Jan 14, 2018

KrollOz said:
i tryed also something.

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