Nate, for some feedback, it looks like an ok fight but it’s much easier and more enjoyable for viewers to watch if you edit the video into a highlights reel, combining a group of 10sec clips into a full video of about 2-3 mins long.
If you don’t edit, people will watch 20 seconds, get bored and leave. If you look at YouTube studio, it will give a graph (see below) which shows you how long your viewers watch for, before leaving.