Overall, very good. I would love to have seen a shot just sitting still, look straight down at the spire, dead-center in the frame. A few really close-up shots of some of the detail on the tower portion would have been nice too.
I’m also not sure why there is 10 seconds of Mavic Mini ads (?) edited into the start and end of your video. Is the video about the Spire AND everything you used to make the video? If so, maybe you should add another 10 seconds of Computer Ads as well.