For me (and don't take this personally) it started out good but deviated from there. Here are my thoughts:
- 1) Don't mix several transitions into a single video. They end up taking your attention AWAY from the video and to the transition.
- 2) (goes with #1) - Unless it's some type of Thriller or Action Film stay away from the overly dramatic transitions completely. Totally pulls the viewer out of the Virtual Reality experience.
- 3) This type of video isn't a good fit for the FPV type of flying. I had a co-worker here watching it over my shoulder and she had to quit watching because the "barrel roll" of the FPV was too much on the large monitor. Cater to your audience and if the FPV lovers are your audience then you nailed it.
- 4) Watch the video length. Unless it's very exciting/riveting most people lose interest in an Aerial Video after 60 seconds (less if it's boring). I made it to 1:31 which says a lot

I use LITCHI for this type of work and it works splendidly. I've never tried it using the DJI software because Litchi does it so well time and time again.
Thanks BigAl for the feedback.
I will definitely consider some changes as you mention. And don't worry about being straight, if I could not handle a good critic I would disable the comments on YouTube and stay away from the forums!!
I'm still trying to find a use for the recently acquired FPV as I learn to control it. It would be a shame not to use the possibilities it can offer like the rapid rate of climb/descent. But you're right, I should stay away from the acrobatics unless it is a specific FPV video.
What about this transition? When the FPV rolls from 2020 to 2021...
And then if you had to select a transition, which one works best? a fade, a slide?
more examples
Sometimes I have to use different transitions to hide the fact that both videos don't really overlap... ;-)
Anyway, I'm not being paid for this stuff, I'm just having fun. In Cambodia so far there are a lot of huge construction projects which create dramatically different landscape changes every year and drone regulations are still being drafted.
Soon I might be limited by height and line of sight...
I am able to follow 2 airport construction projects which started from scratch! How many chances like this will I get?
See here
Phnom Penh airport
Also, there is this 100 hectare backfill project for
a city on the Mekong!
If you have time to watch these examples (the link takes you directly to the transition), I will value your feedback much more than the $3/month I can get from You Tube! ha ha ha