Promo video that I'm working on for a local park

[RCdancer]

I'm working on a promo video for a local park. Shooting for a year through all 4 seasons. Here's an early idea of what it will look like:

 

[UAV Ernst]

I'm working on a promo video for a local park. Shooting for a year through all 4 seasons. Here's an early idea of what it will look like:

Nicely done, RCdancer! Music is calming, as being in nature should be.

 

[Photo-Sorko]

Hey there!

All in all good work. The scenes are well chosen and I like the overall colors and the start in the fog. The music fits.

I also have a few suggestions, mainly because I encounter the same challenges:

• Some of your flights aren’t smooth enough. Maybe you can snip out the parts where there are no hickups or maybe you can even redo them. Examples:
  • at 0:25 start a little bit later after small shake (I think it’s the acceleration)
  • at 1:08 cut one or two seconds earlier
• People:
  • at 0:30: I’d also cut out the first two seconds and start when nearly all are waving
  • at 2:07: it’s the same movement as with the group at 0:30; Maybe try a very short hero shot (cycling around the older guy)
• Some scenes are a bit to bright for my taste. Particularly at 1:54, because the people/faces are way too bright.

But those are all minor things. As I said in the beginning, it’s a lovely, well done video. Carry on!

Greetings
Jürgen

 

[HiYa]

Great video! Enjoyed watching it including the relaxing background music. Keep up the good work!

 

[stapenhillphoto]

Great job! Makes me want to go there for a walk/hike.

 

[RCdancer]

Hey there!

All in all good work. The scenes are well chosen and I like the overall colors and the start in the fog. The music fits.

I also have a few suggestions, mainly because I encounter the same challenges:

• Some of your flights aren’t smooth enough. Maybe you can snip out the parts where there are no hickups or maybe you can even redo them. Examples:
  • at 0:25 start a little bit later after small shake (I think it’s the acceleration)
  • at 1:08 cut one or two seconds earlier
• People:
  • at 0:30: I’d also cut out the first two seconds and start when nearly all are waving
  • at 2:07: it’s the same movement as with the group at 0:30; Maybe try a very short hero shot (cycling around the older guy)
• Some scenes are a bit to bright for my taste. Particularly at 1:54, because the people/faces are way too bright.

But those are all minor things. As I said in the beginning, it’s a lovely, well done video. Carry on!

Greetings
Jürgen

All valid points which I will undertake in the final cut. thanks,