I liked the film but found it somewhat repetitive in an attempt to fill space. In this case, I think, less is more.
You need more footage of other subjects, not just many viewpoints of the same subject. The key , I think, is to take more time, go back to this subject or a related subject on another day and shoot some more footage with a fresh eye. The more material you have, the more you have to choose from at the editing table. You can cherry pick the good stuff and dump the ordinary or bad stuff.
I just completed a project which I intend to put here in the forum tonight. After a full shooting trip, I spent the day at the editing desk and found I needed more material. So I waited for a nice weather day (fluffy clouds for me), and went back for a 2nd shoot. Professional editors call these clips, "assets." So the more assets you have in your folder on the desktop, the more you have to choose from.
Dale
Miami