I haven't seen your other videos yet, so I don't know why, in comparison, this one isn't doing as well, but I see nothing really wrong with it. It's an amazing video. Like seriously great.
My only complaint, and it really is minor, is that you go back to some of the same subjects a few more times than I thought necessary. Like for example, you show surfers. And then a few shots later, more surfers from a slightly different angle. Then again later, surfers. I get it, people surf. But, then you'll have a shot going back to an earlier subject like the kayakers and now it's kayakers next to water breaking on rocks and I'm like ok THATS a cool, different shot.
So even though you repeated and I started to get a bit bored, a few seconds later something different and amazing popped up and I'm like, ok I'm interested again.
My one other critique is, I liked the lighthouse at night, was there anything else at night you could have shown? Or is that literally the only thing lit up at night? Otherwise some more night shots or maybe even a night hyperlapse would be great to include.
Other than those very minor points, the video is fantastic and I don't understand why it's not getting more traction.