Nice shots, nice music, very nice composition and great areas you filmed! Very nice timelapses too!
Perhaps 4 times circling the church tower is too often and as
@DougMcC wrote the last shot of the cross in the sunset would have made a great final. But thats just my opinion.
Another thing I want to mention is that I often saw a tiny stutter in the video. Not allways, but often. I saw the video twice to be sure it's not my connection that lacks. For example at 0:10 the nearby rocks, at 0:20 the steeple, at 0:24 both towers, left one worse, at 0:26 the high building behind the left tower and so on. As I see the video is published in 24 fps. Is it possible you filmed in 30 or 60 fps? Or perhaps it happened when slowing down the original movie?
And perhaps a bit more color grading at 2:03, the scenes before and after are more colorful.
But then it would be... well, perfect. And who wants to be perfect? It's a great video as it is!!! Really! Thanks for posting it!