I agree with most of the feedback. Beautifully filmed and flown. I'll add one more: While music is very subjective and it's not easy to appeal to a wide audience, I would shoot for what feels "appropriate" for the visual. I really enjoyed your captures, but yes, I would cut about 2/3rds of this and keep the best of the best, sweeping, reveals, etc... And maybe use either gentle contemplative music or go full Epic soaring strings. As I said, that's what I would do, you have the Com, as Kirk would say to Sulu or Chekov! It's almost impossible to ruin shots like this, though I know a few people who could manage it, LOL!