Since you asked....
There is a lot to like here. I particularly like some of the colors and your opening was pretty compelling. Most of the scenery was spectacular. However there are some things that could stand some improvement.
I would suggest exploring adjusting the yaw and gimbal rate and smoothness and practice. With continuous clips we have to be super careful to be perfectly smooth. A tough order, I know. Part of it knowing what you want to do in advance as opposed to making corrections. I think sometimes it's better for a few moments to forget about getting the perfect framing rather than ruining a shot with a course/gimbal correction.
Take a look at the clip starting at 2:01. I see an exposure/grading issue that I think can be easily handled.
Lastly, I don't think I've ever seen a "guy wire", so I don't exactly know what they are... But if I were to guess that those wires holding up the towers were them, the drone is way too close. If they are guy wires, the rules say you need to stay clear of them by 2000'.