Nice video, good editing and nice clips. However, you could improve the video in the following ways:
- There is a lack of a common colour scheme throughout the video: some scenes tend to green, some to red, some to yellow. For example, and very easy to see: the first scene the clouds/fog is greenish but in the second scene, they start to be white and red predominates on the ground, then in the third scene, greenish, ... the same happens with the white balance.
- Don't saturate the colours so much and make them more real, for example, in 0:29 they are totally unrealistic.
- Lack of better stabilisation in many scenes, e.g. at 2:18.
- Stuttering in some scenes, probably due to not recording at the right fps.
- Some noise reduction would do the video a lot of good.
I hope this will help you in future videos