Criticism on my newest shot please.

[TheEMan199]

My local vape shop needed a video for their Facebook and I offered my Mavic for the owner. Any tips and tricks for next time are welcome.

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[DomoDan]

Is that guy supposed to look cool with his "vape" and that limo? Nothing against the work you did with your Mavic, but I think that guy and that whole thing is ridiculous. You did a great job filling it, but...

 

[Drone Master]

No Tobacco or Vapor products should be advertised on this forum.
Cool piloting, but not wanted here.
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[Qoncussion]

No offense, but this video really doesn't work on many levels. There's an art to visual story telling. This is just some random up and down shots of a guy smoking (vaping). There's really nothing to see here.

 

[TheEMan199]

No offense, but this video really doesn't work on many levels. There's an art to visual story telling. This is just some random up and down shots of a guy smoking (vaping). There's really nothing to see here.

I mean I was there for literally 20 minutes and that's all I was able to get at the time. Are you saying it needed the city, building, a passing car or two, and the inside of the building too?

 

[frankiez]

I mean I was there for literally 20 minutes and that's all I was able to get at the time. Are you saying it needed the city, building, a passing car or two, and the inside of the building too?

Maybe not all of those but definitely the building, the entrance maybe and a look inside. Maybe a slow pan of the inside. Cuz as a potential customer, I really don't care if they have a limo or not and one shot of the guy smoking would be enough.

At least IMHO

 

[DomoDan]

Maybe not all of those but definitely the building, the entrance maybe and a look inside. Maybe a slow pan of the inside. Cuz as a potential customer, I really don't care if they have a limo or not and one shot of the guy smoking would be enough.

At least IMHO

Yeah, I worked in marketing for a decade and this isn't anything I'd ever accept as any sort of commercial or advertisement. Then again, it is a small town vape shop...but still, it doesn't say anything about the business or why I'd want to go there (if I did have any interest in a vape shop, which I do not).

 

[dirkclod]

Interesting .

 

[Gilly]

Too close, too many repetitive shots, Most of the video would have been better suited to hand held. Not enough happening in the shot, vaping is ***.