Seeking critique of my recent video

[Kyle76]

Big Rock

I put this together last week. I'd appreciate advice on how I can improve. Thanks.

 

[Dale D]

Big Rock

I put this together last week. I'd appreciate advice on how I can improve. Thanks.

Very nice job
I don’t see much to criticize
Dale
Miami

 

[DISC]

Don’t have an account so nothing showing…..

 

[Cymruflyer]

Looks nice, to me.

 

[Cymruflyer]

Very nicely done even if it was not your first video.