Sweeping autumn fog video, analysis, recommendations, ideas, and criticism...

[MKurr]

Here is the second video I made with this years autumn footage, I tried to use some of the advice from the last thread (Thanks everyone who gave advice @vindibona1, Dale D, and others)....

Here it is:

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[TerryToast]

Nice vid.

I liked
- The “sunrise/reveal” at the start
- The “pan-up reveals” through the film
- The short clips
- The colours
- The music

I disliked
- The weak/dull clip at 16-29sec. I would have deleted this clip entirely, as it drags the quality of your movie down.
- The sunset (?) clip at 1min 45sec. It looks out of sequence, which disrupted the flow of the movie for me

All in all though, a good movie. Well done.

 

[MKurr]

Nice vid.

I liked
- The “sunrise/reveal” at the start
- The “pan-up reveals” through the film
- The short clips
- The colours
- The music

I disliked
- The weak/dull clip at 16-29sec. I would have deleted this clip entirely, as it drags the quality of your movie down.
- The sunset (?) clip at 1min 45sec. It looks out of sequence, which disrupted the flow of the movie for me

All in all though, a good movie. Well done.

Hmmm, interesting points...

As for the clip at 1:45, it was meant to fit into a pause in the music, which could be interpreted as breaking the flow though....