Very nice video. We are all learning how to edit, it seems. My impression was that the individual clips were a bit on the long side. I actually clocked the boat scene as around 10 seconds. A faster pace seems what is most popular in viewing on these forums and on Vimeo/ You Tube so I am trying to keep my clips down to 2-3 seconds max. In that way, I get to show more scenes, and I put in still images, drone videos, OsmoAction video, iPhone video, etc.
As far as the music, my taste would be less epic, but it all individual taste, as we all know.