Please offer any constructive comments! On my channel I also have one video from five years ago of a similar tower, just a plain video, overexposed (it seems), so this is a "remake" one could say).
Thanks!Overall, it's good. Music definitely fit. Scenery is really good.
One spot (2:00- ish) was a bit "spinny." Had the dizzying effect. A couple of scenes seemed to be duplicate.
Right now I'm trying to figure out what "thumbnail" photo to use. I think the one I had was overcrowded and uninteresting, this one... maybe the same.
Any ideas anyone?
If I then keep the same style/picture, basically this then?The picture itself isn't bad, though it is dark. There is way too much text though. A bit of text can be good but it should stand out. The "Epic Aerial Drone View" 3D look frankly reminds me of a 90s PC game. Getting rid of all the rest of the text and then centering "Blue Mountain Fire Tower" in front of (or behind) the tower would make for a much cleaner thumbnail.
Remember that people are getting served this thumbnail along with numerous others at the same time. It needs to grab their attention immediately or they'll gloss right over it.
Today I did some research about how to make them better, so soon I'll try to come out with a totally redesigned version.)That's definitely an improvement, at least to my eyes!
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