Pretty darn good. You get my seal of approval.I just went out for a practise this afternoon for half an hour. I need to learn how to edit photos with this Lightroom 6 I have recently got.
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In the first image I think there was bit too much green. I adjusted to my taste (only) in Photoshop.Pretty darn good. You get my seal of approval.
You have done a good job of keeping things looking natural while enhancing. Most people get carried away when they are starting out
Sorry @KingRat ’s is much better in my opinion. Yours looks yellow and not as appealing. Yours also looks a little blown out and flat to me too. Your shadows are completely unnatural and have a magenta tint. You’ve also fallen into the “texture/clarity slider trap” (kudos for staying out of the “dehaze trap” though.In the first image I think there was bit too much green. I adjusted to my taste (only) in Photoshop.
I brought it into Adobe Camera RAW (ACR) and adjusted the sliders as shown. Less contract, less green, more details, etc. I opened the shadows. Here is the before and after and my ACR settings.View attachment 113977View attachment 113977View attachment 113978View attachment 113979
you are probably correct- going back there is of any over correction to the yellow.Sorry @KingRat ’s is much better in my opinion. Yours looks yellow and not as appealing. Yours also looks a little blown out and flat to me too. Your shadows are completely unnatural and have a magenta tint. You’ve also fallen into the “texture/clarity slider trap” (kudos for staying out of the “dehaze trap” though.
I mean this all in the nicest least combative way. It’s not personal. I say what I mean some people like it some people hate it.
I would have brought up the shadows just slightly on the original but just a tiny bit.
Sorry @KingRat ’s is much better in my opinion. Yours looks yellow and not as appealing. Yours also looks a little blown out and flat to me too. Your shadows are completely unnatural and have a magenta tint. You’ve also fallen into the “texture/clarity slider trap” (kudos for staying out of the “dehaze trap” though.
I mean this all in the nicest least combative way. It’s not personal. I say what I mean some people like it some people hate it.
I would have brought up the shadows just slightly on the original but just a tiny bit.
Version 2, is that better in your eyes?
I don't think our old fashioned normal bulb lighting in the house helps!View attachment 113983
As we say in Miami (although I am not Hispanic) MUCHO MEJOR! (Much better!). Greens are much more realistic. Can you open the shadows in your software?Version 2, is that better in your eyes?
I don't think our old fashioned normal bulb lighting in the house helps!View attachment 113983
In the first image I think there was bit too much green. I adjusted to my taste (only) in Photoshop.
I brought it into Adobe Camera RAW (ACR) and adjusted the sliders as shown. Less contract, less green, more details, etc. I opened the shadows. Here is the before and after and my ACR settings.View attachment 113977View attachment 113977View attachment 113978View attachment 113979
As we say in Miami (although I am not Hispanic) MUCHO MEJOR! (Much better!). Greens are much more realistic. Can you open the shadows in your software?
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