@Mavics Rule: Over all - Great vids.
Suggestion section: (The following are my own views)
Light: Since you flew when you did, perhaps you can use the EC to adjust the light levels a bit. (Example (Part 1)) you were under the elevated walkway, the light seemed good, but when you came out, the video got darker. So, fly with video in manual or use the exposure lock to keep it at a level you like.
Speed: For me - It felt like you were flying around as fast as you could to capture as much as you could. Slowing down a bit would give a cinematic look to it.
Your flying is really good and the area is very beautiful - Everyone definitely looked like they were having a blast - I liked the slow-mo of the girl jumping off the rock.