could i have some feedback on my video?

FantasticMrF · May 25, 2017

give me some feedback please

Former Member · May 25, 2017

Would you mind expanding the title of your thread to something more specific? "Looking for feedback on my video" would be a better title.

You can change the name of your thread by using "thread tools" then "edit title"

Marine0302G2/8 · May 25, 2017

Nice job! From a novice point of view, I really enjoyed it. I'm sure some of the pros will have some helpful advice.

FantasticMrF · May 25, 2017

Thunderdrones said:
Would you mind expanding the title of your thread to something more specific? "Looking for feedback on my video" would be a better title.

You can change the name of your thread by using "thread tools" then "edit title"

Sorry, last time I did and my whole message got deleted and my title was shortened

FantasticMrF · May 25, 2017

Marine0302G2/8 said:
Nice job! From a novice point of view, I really enjoyed it. I'm sure some of the pros will have some helpful advice.

Thanks very much! Probably will do

8BitMavics · May 25, 2017

Looks neat! From a layperson point of view, I found the scenes a little too long. There were a few times I was waiting for the scene transition. The top-down view made me a little nauseous... but was nice since you incorporated two elements (water and land) and it was shot diagonally. Probably the lack of horizon sets me off but that's just me.

Overall, keep on shooting!

FantasticMrF · May 26, 2017

8BitMavics said:
Looks neat! From a layperson point of view, I found the scenes a little too long. There were a few times I was waiting for the scene transition. The top-down view made me a little nauseous... but was nice since you incorporated two elements (water and land) and it was shot diagonally. Probably the lack of horizon sets me off but that's just me.

Overall, keep on shooting!

Thanks very much for your feedback! Very good points and I shall do