Hi, nice idea for the opening scenes!
In general I like the video, short cuts, the music fits.
But you mix a lot of different kinds of movements and jump around a lot between very different locations.
In my opinion it would be better to try to tell some kind of a story, perhaps some shots in the suburbs, then some with water, then some of the city. Put scenes together that have something in common.
And, if you tilt and pan that fast (which I like in this video and is nice with fast cuts), you have to raise your fps. 24 fps is too low, I see a lot of stuttering. Even if many tell that 24 fps is the best for cinematic videos, stuttering isn't.
But you have a lot of nice ideas (scene starting at 0:49 for example)!!!